This is a little story i want to share with you guys. I really hope you like it. Tell me anything i can do better with
Im home alone. I text you "baby im home alone come over" when you come over you see me in a pair boxers that are to small making my hardon pop out from the slot getting you wet already. I grin and pull you in and push you against the door as i grind against you my dick pushing your panties into your pussy lips under your skirt. I suck on your jaw line making you moan my name as you run your fingers through my hair tugging at the ends. As i grind against you pushing your panties and dick in you alittle bit more with every thrust making you moan loudly filling you up like no other. I push you on the table with your legs spread up and wide exposing your dripping wet pussy. I stroke my already throbbing cock as you rub your pussy pushing a finger in you every now and then. I start to rub my dick against your ass and tell you to keep going as i start to fuck your ass hard and fast making you scream my name at the top of your lungs. I keep going harder and faster streching your ass out making you scream louder and louder as your sweet juices flood out all over my cock making it lubed so i can go faster and deeper. I stop and you stand up and bend over the table and spread your ass showing my your pussy and ass showing my your juices all over your ass and legs. I get on my knees and start to lick up the juices from your legs making you shiver and moan softly and beg me to lick you. I finish cleaning your legs and i immediately to start to lick your ass not hitting your asshole till i clean every little drop up. I stand up and whisper in your ear "god i love the way you taste" i get back on my knees and spread your pussy lips open and i push my tongue deep in you making you moan loudly. As i lick deep in you i can feel your pussy wall hold onto my tongue making me hornier by the minute. I keep licking deeper and deeper till i cant anymore. I start to take my tongue out slowly swirling my tongue so i hit every part of your pussy as i do making you scream loudly. I keep doing that over and after the first time i start to play with your clit roughly. After the thrid time you cum all over my face. I happily lick up every drop. I stand up and look at you panting and dripping in sweat. I start to rub my dick against your pussy making you moan softly begging me to fuck you hard. I push the head in as i kiss you letting you taste your pussy making you moan loudly. I start to go hard and fast feeling your pussy clench to my dick and i can feel your juices flow out past my dick making my dick twitch and throb in you. You scream telling me how you can feel every movement of my dick inside you. I keep going harder and faster as i start to pant and sweat. I start to push my dick so deep in you i hit the back of your pussy sending shocks of pleasure through your body making you shake and cum for a good minute. I push my dick into your womb and try to pull out but your pussy is to tight and you hold on to me making me shoot my cum deep in your womb. Filling you up and making you cum again. We fall limp on the desk panting. You turn around and kiss me. We makeout for awhile naked on the table. After about 10 minutes you tell me to go to the couch and sit down. You walk up to me and drop to your knees. You stroke my dick getting me hard again. I watch you in pleasure. You start to lick the head of my dick then lick the shaft getting it all wet then you take half sucking on it hard and fast. I throw my head back telling you to go harder and faster. At a good pace you keep taking more and more of my dick till you are deep throating me. I moan your name as i shoot my cum down your throat. You swallow it all and you sit next to me. I put my arm around you and kiss you then i start to kiss your neck as i rub your pussy making you moan again and you push my hand deeper in you. I stop and lick my fingers. I keep sucking on your neck more and more giving you a hickey. I whisper in your ear "mmmm you like when i mark my spot dont you?" You quickly say yes and beg me for more. I push you on your back and start to kiss your inner thigh teasing you a bit. You grab my hair pushing my face towards your pussy. I start to lick your asshole making you scream and start to flood. I keep licking deep in you. I push my tongue deep in your ass as your tight ass pushes my tongue out. I move my hand up and start to finger you again pushing 2 fingers in you making you scream my name begging me more and more. I start to curl my fingers in your pussy as your walls grip my fingers tightly. I can feel your juices squirt every where as you keep moaning and screaming in pure pleasure. I keep licking up all your juices going deeper and deeper in your ass. I feel you start to shake as you cum all over my face. I lick it all up again and start to lick deep in your pussy as you beg me to give you a break or youll cum again. I ignore you licking deep in you hitting every part of your pussy like before making you cum the first time and you go limp. I lick up every drop just as before. I slide up and lay next to you pulling you against me holding you tightly.
First time I downvote something. This isn't even a failed"story". This is a disappointment. Normally I just leave something alone if I don't find it likeable. This fucking DESERVES negative votes.
To below, that idea would only work for a few I'm afraid. However that might work for people that would come in scoring in the sixties that after proofreading may have a decent story bound for the 80's. That might help some people that actually need and want help though. Some of these idiots will post no matter what. This person is a prime example, she also steals stories from others. These are always obvious because there are spam links either at the beginning or the end. Unless the IP addresses are blocked they just keep posting. Most are so arrogant they actually believe their writing is excellent and everyone else has the problem. Arguing with stupid and or crazy people is usually fruitless. I've read here for ten years and in the last three this site has really went downhill. These people that think they can just slap anything up here and have people falling all over them have truly ruined a great place.
Instead of blocking, maybe posts like this one could be moved to another category named something like "How not to write" or "What not to do as an author". This way, new authors could review and if their writing looks anything like the examples, hopefully they'd think twice before posting theirs.
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