We have only one night to enjoy each others company. After tonight we will never see each other again!
We sit and chill flipping through the channels trying to find something to watch while we drink but nothing is really on. You turn off the TV and put on some music in the background while we catch up. After a few drinks i'm starting to feel real good and notice you've had a few beers yourself. I see the way you're looking at me and its starting to make me feel horny. Smiling I stand up and walk over to you. The song playing is a sexy one and I begin to sway my hips and dance in front of you, never breaking eye contact. When I'm close enough I turn around and grind my butt on your lap, still keeping in rhythm with the song. After a few moments I turn around straddle you. Leaning forward I whisper in your ear,"Tell me if you want me to stop." You grip my hair and pull me back. Still gripping my hair you pull me into you and kiss me forcefully. Moaning I grind against you as I feel you start to harden and I grip your shoulders as you hold me in place by my hair. I moan loudly as you nip my bottom lip. You move from my mouth to the left side of my neck and bite me softly. I moan and dig my nails into your arms. You pick me up and wrap my legs around your waist."Where are we going?" "To my room darling" Once in your room you set me down slowly and kiss me again. You pull my shirt off while I try and rip your pants off. Laughing you unzip your pants and pull them off as I do the same. Naked we face each other. My eyes are instantly drawn to your hard dick. I want it. I want to taste you so bad. Kneeling in front of you I lick the head of your dick. Mmmmmm. You taste so good. With one hand I grab the base of your dick and slowly suck you into my mouth. I moan as I feel your dick sliding down my throat as far as I can take. I pull back and let you slide out slowly, swirl my tongue around the head of your dick then swallow you down again. With my hand a move in rhythm with my mouth as I suck on your dick. I feel you slide your hand into my hair and grip tightly. I glance up and see you close your eyes as you shove more of your dick down my throat. I remove my hand and let you shove as much as you want. Before I can stop you you are fucking my throat and I can feel my pussy getting more and more wet. "Suck my dick bitch!" you moan looking down at me. Moaning I play with your balls while you shove more and more of your dick down my throat. I start to gag and you slow down. I pull back and let your dick slowly slide out of my mouth. "Please fuck me." You pull me up and throw me on the bed. "My turn." You pull me to the edge of the bed and spread my legs. I shiver as I feel your breath on me. You lick my pussy and I arch my back as pleasure shoots through my body. You pull my legs onto your shoulders and start eating me like you will never get another chance. Which is true since this is a one time thing. One night only. I dig my nails into your shoulders and arch my back overwhelmed by pleasure. When I feel you slide a finger into me I moan loudly and dig my nails deeper into your back. "Baby please, slow down. I don't want to cum yet!" In response to my plea you slide another finger into me and start sucking on my clit. I scream your name as I begin to cum and my body starts to shake. Smiling you wipe your face and slide up my body. You kiss me and I am able to taste my cum on your mouth. I feel your dick poking me in my stomach and it makes me want you all the more. "I want to ride you." I whisper against your lips. "Ok" you lay back and pull me up on top of you. Placing my hands on your chest I slowly slide down your dick. I throw my head back and moan as you fill me. "God you feel so damn good!" I grab your shoulders and lift up slowly and moan as I slide back down. "You're so deep." You grab my hips as I lift up again and then slam me down roughly as you lift up to meet my hips with yours. I scream as I feel your dick push into my stomach. "You're mine tonight darling." You smile as you slam into me again. My nails dig into your shoulder as I scream again. "Shit, I'm gonna cum again!" You let my hips go and I start to bounce up and down on your dick and right before I cum you grab my hips and pull your dick out till just the head is in. My eyes snap open and I yell, "what are you doing?! Im gonna cum!" I try and wiggle my hips to make you let me go but you just hold me still. "I want to hear you beg for it." "Please baby, Please. I want you so bad. Please" You kiss me hard and lift me off of you. "What are you doing?! I said please!" You laugh and turn me over so that my hands are on the bed and my ass is facing you. I feel your dick rub against my pussy as you slide your hands down back and over my arms,kissing a trail across my back. I moan and arch back towards you trying to get your dick back in me. You pull back and slide your dick in to my pussy. My nails dig into your sheets and I arch my back towards you pushing you as deep as possible. Grabbing my hips you push me forward then slam into me again and again. I drag my nails across your sheets as I scream your name. "This pussy is mine tonight bitch" you say as you smack my ass. I cum hard as I feel the sting of your hand on my ass.
First story,be gentle,to be continued if you guys like it!
Here is the problem you will almost always run into with a POV story: you are telling ME (the reader) how I would react to a situation and you (the author) will never be right about how the reader will react--at least not every (or even most) reader(s). So it is impossible for the reader to become actively engaged in the story; he/she will be completely distracted. Next time, come up with characters and have them act out your vision and I promise the story will be much more successful. Good luck!
Like so many other "wannabe" writers, you have offered the infamous "White Wall of Text" which is difficult to read, even when it is a great story which yours is not. Please learn from this inept effort.
as I am the first to vote and it is negative I would like to explain. It is not really the authors fault. I just do not like POVs. When POV vids first came out there was interplay between the camera man and the person being recorded. It was great. It felt real. NOW, you see dozens on sites like this one they are geared toward fantasy and they feel fake and cheap. Any time I see so much as a story like that I personally feel cheated. That feeling I get not the author or what they did is the reason for my vote.
PS to the author good luck in the future I do hope you keep writing and maybe I will like some of your other works.
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PS to the author good luck in the future I do hope you keep writing and maybe I will like some of your other works.