Susan was seventeen years old, she stood 5’4” and she was a brunette that all of the guys were lusting after. She had clear blue eyes that anyone could get lost in, and an hour glass figure, her face looked completely innocent, and it was true. She was perfect in every way imaginable. Not only was she smart, but she was also gorgeous, some teachers often remarked at her beauty. She had small breasts, about a B cup, but a nice full, round ass Susan was seventeen years old, she stood 5’4” and she was a brunette that all of the guys were lusting after. She had clear blue eyes that anyone could get lost in, and an hour glass figure, her face looked completely innocent, and it was true. She was perfect in every way imaginable. Not only was she smart, but she was also gorgeous, some teachers often remarked at her beauty. She had small breasts, about a B cup, but a nice full, round ass that
boys would gawk at. Unlucky for them, she had a boyfriend, his name was Sammy. Sammy was 21 years old and was finishing up college, though there was a four year difference, he still loved and respected her. He was the luckiest guy, to be dating her.
It was June 21st, and Susan climbed out of the car, and walked over to Sammy’s door. She rang the doorbell, trying her hardest to contain her excitement. When the door opened, she expected a kiss and a hug, but instead Sammy started questioning her about where she had been.
“Where have you been? You said you’d be here at nine, now its 10:30am. “
“I was…at my grandma’s house…”
“Bull shit, I called her, and she said that you had never visited.”
“Look, I can explain…”
She reached into her purse and tried to get out a package, but Sammy slapped her hard across the face. Her head hit the wall, and started bleeding, she was almost unconcious.
“Stupid bitch, how many guys have you been seeing?? No wonder you’ve been avoiding me this week, I bet you’ve been having sex with ten guys…I was wrong about you, you are going to regret this.”
He carried her into the house, and dumped her on the bed. He took her purse and threw it into the corner, and took all of her clothes off. He head was spinning, and blood was trickling down the side of her face. She was unable to speak, and couldn’t stop Sammy, he was far too strong at this point. He began to slap her face, each time her cheeks were turning redder and her tears were streaming down her face. She started to scream, so he bundled up her panties and shoved them into her mouth. Then he moved down to her tits, he started to squeeze them, each time with more force, until hand marks were clearly visible on the skin. He played with and twisted her nipples until they were rock hard and he licked them.
“Stupid bitch, this is gonna hurt.”
“MUFFFGHH”
He took out his cock, it was hard and lined it up with the opening at her pussy. Without warning, or any form of lubrication, he pounded his cock into her pussy, cauing louder screams.
“AHHH, that feels so good”
While he was pumping her pussy, he reached up and squeezed her tits more and more, and started to slap them. He took his cock out and reached into the drawer and grabbed the whip. As he pumped harder and harder, he would hit her with the whip. The sting
boys would gawk at. Unlucky for them, she had a boyfriend, his name was Sammy. Sammy was 21 years old and was finishing up college, though there was a four year difference, he still loved and respected her. He was the luckiest guy, to be dating her.
It was June 21st, and Susan climbed out of the car, and walked over to Sammy’s door. She rang the doorbell, trying her hardest to contain her excitement. When the door opened, she expected a kiss and a hug, but instead Sammy started questioning her about where she had been.
“Where have you been? You said you’d be here at nine, now its 10:30am. “
“I was…at my grandma’s house…”
“Bull shit, I called her, and she said that you had never visited.”
“Look, I can explain…”
She reached into her purse, but Sammy slapped her hard across the face. Her head hit the wall, and started bleeding, she was almost unconscious.
“Stupid bitch, how many guys have you been seeing?? No wonder you’ve been avoiding me this week, I bet you’ve been having sex with ten guys…I was wrong about you, you are going to regret this.”
He carried her into the house, and dumped her on the bed. He took her purse and threw it into the corner, and took all of her clothes off. He head was spinning, and blood was trickling down the side of her face. She was unable to speak, and couldn’t stop Sammy, he was far too strong at this point. He began to slap her face, each time her cheeks were turning redder and her tears were streaming down her face. She started to scream, so he bundled up her panties and shoved them into her mouth. Then he moved down to her tits, he started to squeeze them, each time with more force, until hand marks were clearly visible on the skin. He played with and twisted her nipples until they were rock hard and he licked them.
“Stupid bitch, this is gonna hurt.”
“MUFFFGHH”
He took out his cock, it was hard and lined it up with the opening at her pussy. Without warning, or any form of lubrication, he pounded his cock into her pussy, causing louder screams. His throbbing seven inch cock was a tight fit into her little cunt. The skin was forced to stretch in order to fit the entire cock. It was ripping her apart.
“AHHH, that feels so good”
While he was pumping her pussy, he reached up and squeezed her tits more and more, and started to slap them. He took his cock out and reached into the drawer and grabbed the whip. As he pumped harder and harder, he would hit her with the whip. Her arms soon were full of red lines, and bruises. Her screams began to fade, her body was starting to shut down. He hit her one more time, this time with much force causing her to stay awake, and causing her to suffer. He enjoyed her screams, he thought she loved him--but he was wrong. She stabbed him right in the face, and he hated her for that. He loved her with all of his heart--and now he felt nothing but pure hatred. He continued to fuck her constantly.
Sammy turned Susan on her stomach, and jammed a finger up her ass. Her muffled screams became shrieks and he enjoyed it more and more. Now, he took his cock and shoved it up her ass. Each thrust his thighs would slam against her ass. He constantly was hitting her, and though it caused him pain, he knew she was suffering more. His head was filled with hate.
After he finished, he came on her face, and on her tits. Took his hands and rubbed it in, with force. He pushed her off of the bed, and told her to get dressed, that he never wanted to see her again. That she deserved what she got.
"I never want to see you again, from this point on, I never want to hear your naggy little voice in my ear, you have lost all meaning to me. I can't believe you cheated on me. you little whore. You said you were saving yourself for me, and i was stupid enough to believe you. Damn, i was stupid. Slut. Get out of my house, bye Sue."
Susan slowly stood up, arms shaking. She collapsed, but managed to pick herself up. SHe gathered all of her clothes, and put them on slowly. SHe took her panties out of her mouth and put them on. After she was dressed she walked over to the door. Tears streaming down her face, she opened the door and shut it. A few seconds later, she knocked,
"what do you want? I already told you--get out of my face.slut."
She reached into her purse and pulled out a box wrapped in gift paper. Written on it were the words 'i love you'
"I went to see the store to pick up your present I had custom made for you. The last few months i've been working overtime to pay for your gift. It's our three year anniversary--i wanted to surprise you. I did save my self for you, you took my virginity away, like we planned. I imagined it..differently. but know that--i would never cheat on you. Because I still love you."
She cried, tears were forming in Sammy's eyes too. He opened the box, and there was a brand new Rolex watch, he was staring in awe, and he felt a pang of guilt suddenly hit him. She meekly leaned towards his face and kissed him lightly on the cheek,
"i love--you. even if you hate me"
and she walked away towards her car. A few steps short, she fainted.
He dropped the watch and ran over to her, crying
"I'm so sorry, will you ever forgive me???"
There was no response. He looked at her arms and her face. Her makeup was runny from all of her tears, and her arms and neck were all bruised and red from the whipping. He carried her in his arms, close to his body. Her head was right by his heart. Sammy felt horrible. Not only had he forgotten about the anniversary--but what he did to Susan was unbelievable. He was never able to forgive himself, although she did.
Hey, I really like this.
Don't listen to most of the other negative comments...they were probably just pissed b/c of the repeats.
I like how you incorporate emotion, specifically guilt- I like those elements in a rape story. I agree you could've made it longer though.
Good job!
Hey, I really like this.
Don't listen to most of the other negative comments...they were probably just pissed b/c of the repeats.
I like how you incorporate emotion, specifically guilt- I like those elements in a rape story. I agree you could've made it longer though.
Good job!
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Don't listen to most of the other negative comments...they were probably just pissed b/c of the repeats.
I like how you incorporate emotion, specifically guilt- I like those elements in a rape story. I agree you could've made it longer though.
Good job!
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Don't listen to most of the other negative comments...they were probably just pissed b/c of the repeats.
I like how you incorporate emotion, specifically guilt- I like those elements in a rape story. I agree you could've made it longer though.
Good job!
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