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Comments from viceofchoice
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-04-26 05:13:30 | Alexis' slumber party | Beautiful story, charming and inventive. You have a well deserved high ranking. A little rough in the editing department, sure, as has been mentioned, but overall it's captivating and well worth the read. |
| 2019-04-26 05:23:09 | My Girls_(1) | A great idea, with extensive potential. The idea of such an open, straightforward family is intriguing. Unfortunately, I found your elementary delivery somewhat lackluster and frankly leaving something to be desired. Don't lose heart, though. You have great imagination. Keep at it! |
| 2019-08-14 12:43:50 | A single Little Lie | That was spectacular! Looking forward to reading how this unfolds. Susan's discovery adds a whole new element of drama. While a little editing would polish this story up nicely, the pace was steady and the incest taboo irresistible! |
| 2019-08-14 12:44:19 | A single Little Lie | What I want to know is, what happened at Glacier? |
| 2019-08-19 12:27:18 | An RV trip with Madison | A well written, sweet little story. I enjoyed it. You have some talent at writing, and I encourage you to continue. This story was obviously thought out, planned, and designed carefully. I love the idea of siblings. It reminds me of my own fantasies when I was younger. |