| 2019-01-19 22:38:51 |
My Little Medicine
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A well earned positive rating from me! The story flowed well, and had a flavour of daring intrigue. I'd love to know some more of the history in this family. |
| 2019-02-22 21:57:31 |
The Bet_(0)
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Great story here. Yeah, its pace is a bit quick. There's not a lot of buildup, but overall it was well written and exciting. Another chapter is definitely needed. |
| 2019-02-22 22:01:14 |
Man of the House, part one
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There was an incredible amount of energy in this one! Intense and exciting, the darkness of it all only completed it. An excellent job on "unleashing your demons" in a controlled environment. |
| 2019-03-07 19:21:55 |
Slowly Seducing Becca
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Such a sweet daddy-daughter love story. He has such beautiful care for his little girl, as any father should. Loved this beginning and hope you continue it! |
| 2019-03-20 13:48:19 |
First Time With My Best Friend's Mom
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This is an excellent little story you have here. Simple, but well written, I could envision everything. Everyone has a friend's mom that became one of their first fantasies, and you've captured that desire perfectly. |