| 2018-11-27 14:46:30 |
A Daughter's Weekend Getaway Pt. 1
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An excellent start! Beginning nice and slow, with that fatherly warmth and care that ought to be shown. Well worded and versed with an even pace. And the most insatiable fantasy that every father has whether he voices it or not! Well done! |
| 2018-11-30 14:50:00 |
A Daughter's Weekend Getaway Pt. 2
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Once again, an excellent piece of writing. This daddy/daughter story is charming, well-paced, and sexy as hell! It's a beautiful, erotic fantasy that I can't get enough of. I'm excited for the next chapter! Hurry, please! |
| 2018-12-04 14:49:25 |
A Daughter's Weekend Getaway Pt. 3
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Again, another superb chapter. This story is flawless, and the passion heavy but believable. You're a great author, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter when it's ready. |
| 2018-12-05 14:43:12 |
Fun Camping with Two Young Women
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Again, some editing would polish this story up nicely. Taken altogether, though, it was enjoyable and decently paced. Worth the read and a great fantasy to indulge in. |
| 2018-12-19 14:07:49 |
My Naughty Aunt May_(1)
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Very well written. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I anticipate that there'll be more to their little escapades? Keep writing, ky friend. You have talent. |