| 2019-08-12 12:20:13 |
Movie Night 4
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I've absolutely loved this story so far. I hope you have plans to take it further. Introducing Samantha to sex, and now finding out her mother wants in on the excitement is an irresistible temptation to read. Please continue! |
| 2018-11-14 14:47:41 |
The Bunker
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Well written, decent pace, though the way Kelky just jumps in was slightly too quick, mother's blessing it not. Adequately written with no glaring errors. A well-deserved positive rating, my friend, though I had hoped for more stories while they were in the bunker. Looking forward to another chapter. |
| 2018-11-14 15:03:23 |
Young Uncle Mike Babysits the Teens
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Naughty, taboo, alluring... Excellent story, my friend! While I'm curious what Mike's age is (maybe I just missed it), the thought of four completely desirable - and fully willing - nieces is too tantalizing to pass up. Could use a little editing, such as making sure Mike's name is consistent (where did Tim come from?). Other than that, nothing jarring that would derail the story. |
| 2018-11-15 00:45:51 |
All the Girls at My Place
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A very impressive story, my friend. This neighbourhood will never be the same. There was a good flow, and sequence of events. Looking forward to reading more about his little escapades with the local cuties. |
| 2018-11-19 14:46:46 |
Twin Touches
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A decent little story. Short, but concise, though I do wish it had been longer. A delightfully naughty experience all the same. Just work on paragraph spacing, and it'll help the flow of things. Looking forward to a followup, if you have one. |