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Comments from viceofchoice
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2016-03-09 20:36:50 | Sharing a shower with Mom | Not quite where I thought it would go at first, and I figured it was her father on the other side. Still enjoyed the reveal, though. Nicely done, Eagle. Looking forward to parts two and three. |
| 2016-03-11 04:44:49 | Forbidden Sibling Treasure -- Chapter I: The Sisters' Gems | Thanks again for the great comments and feedback. Working on a second chapter; I know generally what I want to say, but how to say it is the difficult part. As for Pearl's hesitation, Ambrosiaeater, well...heh heh...keep the literary rule of Chekhov's Gun in mind, yeah? ;) |
| 2016-03-14 15:42:05 | The Sleepover_(1) | Sometimes I wish I could get as concise and to the point as you, Ghost, but I love detail. Hahaha! At any rate, excellent story, sizzling hot idea, well written and it leaves it open with many places to go. Well done. |
| 2016-03-14 15:43:44 | The Sleepover_(1) | Sometimes I wish I could get as concise and to the point as you, Ghost, but I love detail. Hahaha! At any rate, excellent story, sizzling hot idea, well written and it leaves it open with many places to go. Well done. |
| 2016-04-18 19:48:58 | Sharing a Shower with Mom – Part III | A third excellent chapter, Eagle. A surprising twist in this one with the addition of a separate family. Some great storytelling, though, and I really enjoyed the delicious, sexy scenes you included. Well done! |