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Comments from who-cares
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-12-22 14:46:28 | My Harem of Cheerleaders 4: Emma | Great job with the dialog. Most never consider using comedy in the middle of sex, or as the catalyst of an encounter. Seriously good stuff! |
| 2015-12-22 15:01:50 | My Harem of Cheerleaders 5: Annie | The episode length is perfect.. And you really could make a book with enough of these episodes. Please, keep writing and publishing. Of course, Alex doesn't have to limit himself to cheerleaders. Their are other girls on campus, and the stories can be at internship or early career settings. |
| 2015-12-22 14:20:24 | My Harem Of Cheerleaders 1: Amanda_(1) | Well written flash fiction. It's fairly fast paced. There's just enough lead-up and detail to make it erotic; without beating the reader with the guy's massive member. It's tough to express characters in a flas fiction word count, but he pulls it off. The sex scenes are good and exciting, but they're driven by the people and situations. It's tough to express characters in a flas fiction word count, but he pulls it off. The writer gets it: every story doesn't have to dwell on the size of the guy's cock or volume of his cum; the torrential downpour from the girl's twat; or ridiculous locations or positions. |
| 2016-01-28 20:35:10 | From Sex Deprived to Sex Addicted Pt. 12 | smwriter- good series, do you plan to continue? |
| 2016-01-28 20:07:29 | An Incest Birthday- The Final Chapter Part 1_(1) | Kevin this is really good work. The storyline is compelling and most of the characters are likable. Even if it takes a while, I agree with the other comments - please keep it going. |