| 2017-07-17 23:53:18 |
Recollections Ch. 05
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I am sorry for your loss. Writing this chapter could not have been easy, but wanted to thank you for sharing with us. I look forward to each chapter as it is written so well. It captivated me from the first chapter. |
| 2017-09-30 14:56:59 |
Potential Part 21
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Another excellent chapter. I love the slow build ups and conflicts that you take the time to do. It makes the readers more engaged and drawn into the story. I also love how you built the characters and took the time to make them seem real. Yes the sex is nice, but the storie is so much more than that and that is why it is so good. The only criticism I can give is the length of time between chapters, but I know it takes time to write, edit, and feel good about. It is just hard to wait for the next one to be published. That is a good indicator that what you are writing is great and captivates the audience. Keep up the excellent work!! |
| 2017-09-30 15:00:33 |
Neighbor's Niece Taylor 1
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Good to see you writing again Sportsfan! |
| 2018-06-22 14:58:05 |
Potential Part 25
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Wanted to encourage you to keep going with the story. Despite the trolls, you have a lot of loyal followers who are on this journey with you. Since the start of the series I have anticipated the next chapter. Your character development has been excellent and relatable. You have a talent for writing and have enjoyed each and every addition. Still curious as hell to see where it will go. Thanks for sharing. |
| 2018-06-22 14:58:09 |
Potential Part 25
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Wanted to encourage you to keep going with the story. Despite the trolls, you have a lot of loyal followers who are on this journey with you. Since the start of the series I have anticipated the next chapter. Your character development has been excellent and relatable. You have a talent for writing and have enjoyed each and every addition. Still curious as hell to see where it will go. Thanks for sharing. |