| 2015-10-02 21:17:02 |
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Thank you both for the comments! Yes, I'm pretty much rubbing my thighs together and ready to orgasm every time I write things like this! Plus my phone screen is so small and a pain to write with! Thanks again for comment! ;) May you both stay wet and have someone to taste your honey! |
| 2015-10-02 16:17:19 |
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I guess I should have posted this in the introduction, I wrote all of this on my phone and typically it corrects my words without me knowing. I'm the type of writer that needs to write my thoughts down when I have an idea, then proof read it. This is a work in progress that I will update when I can. I appreciate the comments on my grammer but I was more wanting to see what people thought of the story as a whole. |
| 2015-10-13 02:13:56 |
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Thank you so much for the comment. I'm glad you liked it. I really enjoyed it and had to share. Hope #3 is even hotter for you! |
| 2015-12-02 00:55:14 |
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Though I appreciate your opinion on my grammer, like I commented above I'm writing this on my phone because most of the time I'm away from a computer when an idea hits. Grammer is something that I can correct later. If you cannot see past the grammer, I'd appreciate if you wuold keep comments to yourself. I want critical help on my idea not grammer. If you take the time to comment on my grammer at least take the time to comment about my idea or my plot as well. This is a sex story site, though grammer is important, I'm not going to have these stories turned in to my English class. So if you want 100% perfect writing than I suggest you find someone who could afford an editor to preproof their grammer, not woman who does not have enough time to sit down and write a story on a computer. For those that commented about my story, in a less rude manner I appreciate for it is people like you that keep others spirits up. |