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Comments from jmiller
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2013-03-20 10:42:50 | Caught in the act_(5) | You have written quite a few stories so it seems late in the game to be receiving advice. But here goes anyway. Review your stories before submitting to remove the numerous spelling errors. Do not just rely on spell-check. Break down your paragraphs when you have conversations. Each person's reply sould be in a separate sentence. Just these as a start would make your stories more readable. |