| 2013-04-19 15:20:21 |
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This was an amazing story love all the detail in which it was done, an how it left you wanting more or not letting you stop cause you want to know what happens next ... great job |
| 2013-04-19 15:30:16 |
Shipwrecked 2
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I have a problem with this there is no introduction is to how they became shipwreck (no storm ) (no reef to hit) nothing there just there out in the big blue ocean. There on an island with animals to hunt. To me that is way to easy no details ... |
| 2013-05-29 17:12:57 |
Spanking Service for a Housewife
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Could be a little longer an a little more detailed ... but other than that it was great |
| 2013-05-29 17:22:34 |
Spanking Service for a Housewife 3
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This type of story could be all in one ..in stead of the short stories ! |
| 2013-07-01 16:03:01 |
Twin Japanese Nieces Pt29_(0)
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Awesome story ! i'm proud to have been able to read it all the way through. you have a great way with words ... keep up the great work. now i just have to keep an eye out for the next story ...thanks bigdave |