| 2016-10-03 19:28:29 |
Tender Trap
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What a wonderful talent! Your stories flow well. Good grammar, spelling, punctuation. I'm sure some readers want more cock & pussy, but a little character & story development go a long ways to make it an enjoyable read. What is most interesting is that while we've all read dozens of sex scenes, yours have a uniqueness to them that makes me not want to miss a single word. Please do keep up the good work!! |
| 2016-10-04 00:26:16 |
High Fashion Queen
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Again, excellent writing! Hope to see a lot more of you. |
| 2016-10-04 15:55:09 |
Meeting James Chapter 6_(1)
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Another well written story. Please post a little about yourself. I'd love to know if you are a trained author or if this comes naturally. Would also love to know if this all comes from your imagination or if it is an embellishment of your life experience. |
| 2016-10-13 12:59:27 |
Feels Like the First TIme
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As always, very nicely written. |
| 2017-12-07 16:16:29 |
The Blind Girl in the Rain: part 3
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A wonderful story and well written. Would love to see more. I struggle a bit with your technique of moving quickly ahead in the story then filling in with flashbacks. Would also like to see some of Mike's thoughts become verbal comments to Heather. / I know how Mike feels. One time in church, no less, I sat next to a very lovely blind gal. It could have been Heather. When communion time came, she asked if she could hold my arm. My mind went the same place Mike's did. Now that I am a widower, I would most certainly ask her out if I ever saw her again. |