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Comments from Sinturian
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2008-08-26 09:44:50 | Barbara M. 2 | I complimented you on the first Barbara story...thought it looked familiar. Then read this one...oh yes, I remember, I had previously written virtually the same stories. Thank you...immitation is the sincerest form of flattery. Sinturian |
| 2008-08-26 07:13:55 | One Summer_(1) | English, grammer, punctuation and detail would be helpful. Some of the sentences just ran together and thoughts weren't complete. The story concept is good. |
| 2008-08-26 23:37:40 | Good job, SSB...I liked it. I also liked the ending, which puts a finishing touch on these things. There can only be so much Oooohhhhh and Ahhh, and then it's repetitive. Obviously, a lot of others have liked it, as well. Sinturian |
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| 2008-08-27 12:29:21 | A Thorough Distraction | Very well done...delicious and sensuous. Certainly causes an erection...LOL. My tongue got hard, too, Congratulations! |
| 2008-08-27 16:37:01 | Life at the Palms Part 1 | Very well written...thought it was going to simply be a slam bam, thank-you-mam when it started, but the detail and word images were very well done. Curious...what happened to Dani? Perhaps in the next chapter? Good job! |