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Comments from davebccanada
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2021-03-21 01:41:43 | Small Town Life | A well recorded occurrence heralding the summer's highlights and hi-jinxes of the young. I enjoyed it very much and commend you on the quality. He fucked both Sam and Amy many times before he married Sam but he never seems to have got Jackie in the sack again. As easy as she was to give in to her needs with him I am surprised. A good read. Thanks for sharing. |
| 2021-03-09 18:39:06 | Little Girl in the Red Hood | Please break it into paragraphs, at least. I can't read it like that, my eyes won't let me. |
| 2021-03-09 19:10:46 | My Sister’s Sweet Ass | Well written, I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. |
| 2021-02-17 23:05:32 | Frisky drinks | SextyJoe, I'm surprised nearly eight thousand have read your true account and none have felt enough interest to comment on your story. You do have a problem of changing perspectives so that one sentence you refer to yourself as me but in the next you refer to yourself as him. That can be confusing but is easily remedied by a quick edit. Some attention to paragraph structure could also be included in the edit. Otherwise yours is a fun read that one can visualize easily. I enjoyed your effort. Thanks for sharing. |
| 2021-02-20 02:59:47 | Michelle's Prom | I say shutter, stutter or shudder... it's all good stuff. LOL I like your style. You got a new fan with me. Hope you stop by and offer me some advise on mine as well. |