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Comments from davebccanada
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-01-10 23:35:12 | Wild Riding to Dublin - A Sequel | Tis a difficult account to rate. lass. He be a sorry sod if ever there ever be one. If I rate you a positive rate then it appears I support him but if I rate your account with a negative rating it seems to indicate a lack of support for you. I suppose no rating is how I will vote. |
| 2015-01-12 03:02:09 | Mall Santa | Hey, I loved this one. I was looking for soft loving stuff tonight and what should I come across but this sweet tale. You have presented us, the readers, with a wondrous gift, wantsomefun. Thanks for sharing. |
| 2015-01-12 03:17:59 | Murder on the Mainline: another Mike Claymore Mystery Chapter 12 | 255 readers and finally a comment. Thank you for expressing a desire to read more. Since I have to reformat my novel, one paragraph at a time, for this site it is taking me a while to enter each chapter. I will add more as I can. |
| 2015-01-13 21:19:13 | HOW I MADE MY SISTER-IN-LAW A WHORE | If you planned to place the story as a news item, you should couch it as such. For instance you could lead it with a headline, then carry through writing as a news reporter might. That's an interesting concept but I suspect you clicked on "news" by error. For ease of reading, you should break it up into shorter paragraphs. Otherwise it was a fun read. Good luck with your future writings. |
| 2015-01-14 05:28:42 | Alice runs away with Mathew and gets herself filled! | You have captured an innocence that hints at inexperience that is so adorable, I loved this tale. Perhaps it had something to do with the amateur style in which you wrote this account. It is not something that could be repeated too often but it works here. I quite liked it. Well done. |