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Comments from Hawkrider
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-05-02 23:09:14 | A Family Betrayal Chapter 17 | Hey all glad you liked the chapter. To the comment about hard to read the POV's that aren't marked. The ones that are not marked that is Heath talking. Wags I got you man and I think in a few chapters you maybe impressed lol but you no hitman or p.i. something better with a girlfriend lol. As to Travis oh he isn't getting off lightly as the next few chapters will show it. Ghost, Tyrone has a past life that brought connections to who the connections are well I'll just say his mentor was a bad man lol Kia, Glad you like the story as there is going to be twist and turns to keep it interesting. But stay tuned as there is going to be a few fights coming up and a big one. Damagedman is somewhat right as I am not going to say who helps Heath and the family.....well not yet anyway I know this story is a long one with many chapters. But there is a reason as Heath isn't just going to forgive family over night. Have a good day peace....Hawk |
| 2015-05-03 06:56:40 | Black Market | Very nicely written loved it |
| 2015-05-03 08:16:18 | Homecoming Dance | Likes this |
| 2015-05-03 20:41:53 | A Family Betrayal Chapter 17 | Hmm wonders where i said that lol. |
| 2015-05-04 06:11:41 | Money Grab | Likes this story very nicely written keep up the great writing |