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Comments from alaricwolfe
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2017-08-09 10:27:07 | Vacation with Family_(0) | 2d characters, no real paragraphs to speak of, and terrible use of punctuation. Your have potential, and some raw talent. With practice and a bit more focus on the story (keep your free hand on the keyboard *wink*) you could be one of the best on this site. |
| 2017-07-19 07:21:50 | Me and Emma down by the river_(2) | A good story. A few grammatical errors, but overall, I say it was time well spent, and I certainly hope to see a 2nd chapter. |