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Comments from xplorer2000
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-08-18 14:48:26 | Stepsister Seduction | This is a great story. Just a hint, if you think the story is too long then it probably is. You can shorten it a little by not repeating things. For example, a couple of times the characters would think something or the narrator would say it and then the character would repeat it, like when the narrator said Tim wanted to stay in bed and in the next paragraph Tim told Jenna he wanted to stay in bed. Overall a very good story. |
| 2014-08-15 16:33:27 | Jacks cross dressing adventure_(1) | This was a great, hot story. It reminds me of when I went to a Halloween party in high school dressed like a girl. I pulled it off so well everyone thought I really was a girl. I ended up drunk and was teasing these two guys. They coaxed me into a bedroom and while one forced me to suck his dick the other ripped off my clothes. Boy did he get a surprise when he saw my dick. It didn't stop him though. He raped me and then one of them went and got some friends. They held me there all night taking turns fucking my ass and mouth. I must have taken six or eight guys, some of them multiple times. I woke up the next day, sore and sticky from all the cum. |
| 2014-08-15 16:02:13 | Sucking the Plumber, Nats Birthday | Good story but who is the plumber? The title doesn't fit the story. |
| 2014-08-15 16:07:22 | Sucking the Plumber, Nats Birthday | Good story but who is the plumber? The title doesn't fit the story. |
| 2014-09-02 16:14:29 | Little brother's little girlfriend. | I have to laugh at all the comments. This is fantasy people and there is nothing illegal about fantasizing or writing about sex with a 13 year old. I can't believe people believe it is a true story just because the author says it is. Writing in the 1st person and stating it is true is part of the story. If you pay attention to the details, it's obviously fiction. It's not a bad story and the scenario is really hot except for all the vomit. It would be realistic, and a lot more erotic, if she only vomited once. Also, using full sentences will make your stories easier to read. |