| 2014-07-05 22:55:45 |
Jake and Tara Part One
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That was awesome make another one |
| 2014-07-26 08:32:16 |
A Game Of Inches - Conclusion - Epilogue
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You are an amazing writer and this story is one of the best I've ever read please keep writing because you truly have a gift at it. |
| 2015-03-01 16:59:42 |
The Chair_(1)
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It was really good I liked it, maybe make them a little bit longer and not just one form of torture, get a little bit deeper under the skin with the emotions of the characters. Overall it was a good start and I could see you making some really good stuff |
| 2015-03-02 06:31:16 |
The Microwave
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Again great story man I really liked it but again I'm a sick guy who likes back sorry and out right gore is fun but I also like the nitty gritty stuff not constant tit pooping and what not, like I want to hear about tendon slicing, slow stabs and cuts, stuff that makes you slightly cringe but also want to whip out your cock, overall keep up the good work man |
| 2015-06-01 07:01:57 |
The Summer of Brooke_(1)
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Hey guys look sorry if I offended you in some way but honestly if you can't take me calling you a dumbass there's an issue there. My writing isn't that good, being fresh out of high school I wouldn't expect anyone to be. And to the two POSITIVE comments on here, I'll definitely keep Brooke going kinky but I doubt I'm gonna get violent again beyond you know kinky violence(spanking, hair pulling, etc.). Idk when the next story will be out but it's summer so it'll probably be in the next week or so. Thanks for the positive support. The rest of you guys can go fuck yourselves don't be a bunch of bitches who can't take a fucking joke. |