| 2015-03-07 05:13:47 |
REBOUND_(2)
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This needs a series |
| 2015-03-29 22:53:24 |
Betrayed by Everyone Complete
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I want him to go postal and just burn them alive or something that would be fantastic!!!!! |
| 2015-03-30 03:42:14 |
Step Mother Needs Saving_(1)
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Well you could go the traditional route and she get a divorce marriage kids the whole thing. You could also go the 180 route and make it a 3 way marriage or more which I don't think you want to from what I'm reading. On the way to your end there would normally be some kind of trouble that comes up that they need to overcome like his dad comes back for revenge type of deal. It sounds like everything but his dad is pretty stable and not much would really happen that's bad so those are the only suggestions I could make really. Good story I really enjoyed reading it. |
| 2015-05-01 07:09:44 |
A New Day, A New You part 11
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That was an unparalleled amount of awesome I just read there! I didn't expect you to bring him in on a job so soon and when you did it was perfect. I can't wait to see what he does! Guys plans are good but I want to see what Stuart can do when he puts his mind to some revenge for a good sounding woman. P.s. Took Robin long enough!!!! |