| 2017-06-21 01:34:32 |
Young Girl Next Door - Part 1
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I hate to complain, but will in the end. I think this is very well written,and the true story tag seems less believable when it was mentioned how long ago this was written. You can whip up a Part 2 and keep stringing us along, to a Part 3. But your believability will take a serous hit if you don't throw us something. At this point just say never mind it wasn't true..... |
| 2017-06-25 04:01:53 |
Fucking a MILF!
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It's a good story. You might want to cut back on telling us how big you are, and how small she is.Meant as constructive criticizm. I'll read more. |
| 2017-07-09 21:56:31 |
Teacher's Pet_(1)
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I agree with everybody else. Great start, I didn't think I'd be hooked, but you got me. |
| 2017-10-11 21:08:16 |
my first blowjob_(1)
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Believable story, kind of pushing me to write some of my true stories. |
| 2017-12-04 07:32:00 |
Daddy Shares Me With The Neighbour!
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What "full name thing", or are just trolling with your tiny dick in hand ? |