| 2017-09-19 16:09:36 |
Our First Meeting Part 3
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This goes out to HappyCannuck. Thank you for your comment. I did proof read this one, plus I changed the word document package I was using. So hopeful this one will read better. I had it spaced out in the word document but it was to late when I noticed it had not spaced out. |
| 2018-02-21 10:14:14 |
The Daughter
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@countrycadillac I will take that on board and thank you for your advice. |
| 2018-03-03 11:45:52 |
How I met Sam
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A very good story and a very good read. Don't worry about the ones running you down. They are Anonymous for a reason. They either don't have a profile, don't want you to read there stories or don't have any. Either way they aren't to confidence in there own work. In my opinion splitting the story in two might off been easier. Just saying. But defiantly a good story |
| 2018-03-16 17:25:03 |
A Surprise Threesome
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The only advice I can give you is this. Prof read your story, make it longer with more details. I like the idea but in my option it needs to be longer. I am by no means a pro writer. Just keep trying. 5 stars. |
| 2019-06-18 09:47:22 |
My Neighbor Emily
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I really enjoyed the story. Would love to read part 2 |