| 2017-08-15 16:33:04 |
My Motel Fantasy
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I liked the story. The only down point is u only said when Mike cum. U never said where the rest cum. But still 10 out of 10 |
| 2017-08-04 15:56:02 |
The Agreement_(1)
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I liked this. The next story has a good starting point. A bit longer maybe next time. But I liked it. |
| 2017-07-18 13:43:36 |
Our First Meeting_(3)
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Well @draconias how about you tell me where the spelling mistakes are and we can sort them out. Or better still write a story of your own and we will see how that one goes down |
| 2017-07-11 16:28:09 |
Once upon a time in New mexico
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You need to prof read your story |
| 2017-07-11 16:29:10 |
Once upon a time in New mexico
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Proofread your story |