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Comments from TheHollow
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2015-09-22 03:15:40 | WHITE pt VI | Thank u all for your comments both positive and negative. I apologize for the format snafu and my complete lack of..well 9th grade English class basics. This is the only erotic story ive ever written. if there are any aspiring editors among u I'd like to beg of your service for this piece. This is the end of this particular story for me. However I'd be delighted to see an expansion/ spin off by another author. I'd be willing to contribute to such a project as an author also. Thanks again. |
| 2016-05-06 06:27:53 | WHITE pt VI | Thank you so much for your comment, Michael. I had a great time writing this story as well as Kaylyn's "research". It's the only story I've written and yet I find myself going back to re edit and reformat it. why? First off i feel guilty about not correcting the format/ paragraph/ spacing issue in the first place but secondly because i think i just wanna hang out with the characters again. who knows maybe ill continue on sometime. To your second point, many of these stories aren't about fantasizing about anyone's actual mother so don't feel as if you're a freak for reading it all the way through. Fantasizing about being Chase fantasizing about HIS mother (or vice versa) is as well as it was to begin with. p.s. My mouth would be watering too if I were him;) |