| 2014-05-20 20:38:41 |
Return to Earth - 08
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i am finding this story hard to put down can't wait for the next chapter but happy that you are taking the time to write it has you want it to come out . if you mixed the now an then up a bit that may keep some other readers happy but i do not agree with the comment about " totally polluted" keep up the good work |
| 2013-07-25 18:00:56 |
The Swimming Lessons
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good start but where is the water sports or did i miss it ? |
| 2014-05-16 17:50:04 |
The Truth_(0)
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there is nothing wrong with sex between two consenting adults if they both like porn better they watch it together |