| 2013-03-11 16:12:38 |
Matt's Little Sister
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Excellent story... almost forgot she was 12 :) |
| 2013-03-16 05:11:28 |
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good story but phone texting part throws the rhythm of the story, to me. Other than that.. its good - like your drunk daddy story. |
| 2013-03-20 23:45:38 |
Wet Dreams_(0)
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Good story .. but for my tastes, i enjoyed reading the description of what the monster was doing and the characters' reaction more than i enjoyed reading about the monster "talking". I can't say why - at this late hour my mind is not thinking well enough to know why that is. |
| 2013-03-20 23:51:38 |
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good story..i would have enjoyed future chapters, it's too bad thre won't be any. |
| 2013-03-21 23:16:59 |
Josh Gets Drunk and Rapes His Sister_(1)
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good story.. although epilogue ending seemed a bit rushed, almost as if it was an after thought. Such a good story deserved a better written ending... perhaps even stretched into a second chapter.... with more about her continued lessons from big brother? |