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Comments from animal99
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-07-09 18:00:18 | I finally deepthroat my girlfriend | The title is TERRIBLE english... a guy doesn't DEEP THROAT a woman unless she has a COCK and YOU are sucking on HER cock! |
| 2015-09-10 04:08:23 | Fucking Karen | It wasn't an actual rape..it was a dream about a rape - Not illegal! (Simply a fantasy!) |
| 2015-09-26 04:51:35 | Mother's Proxy_(1) | I thoroughly enjoyed this story. More enjoyable coming from a favorite author! Hope to see more stories! |
| 2015-10-12 19:30:06 | Incest Series Part 1- Raping my teen sis | I thought your story had a good premise but really, you made it a bit to violent. When your story showed your sister's body getting turned on by what you were doing, you could have kept that line of thinking going ... thereby making it a rape story that ended with her truly enjoying herself, despite her being forced to have sex. You could therefore have truly made it a sexually compelling fantasy that could appeal to many people. But keeping it about one guys' selfish quest to hurt his sister, that turned me off. Perhaps if you re-read it, changed it around a bit, and re-posted it (using current title, then ending with "-Editted".. might get you a far better POSITIVE score!) I would even be tempted to read your revised version. |
| 2015-10-20 15:03:46 | voodoo slave part 1 | As a member of the grammar police, let me say that this was a good story... it really had potential. But the mistakes in "grammar" weren't as much grammar mistakes as stylistic errors. You do have a good story but it would have read BETTER if you had remembered punctuation, proper capitalization, and simple sentence structure issues that even a 5th grader would have followed. I look forward to reading future chapters, and I do hope you get someone to proofread the story for you before you post it! |