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Comments from animal99
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-04-04 01:01:15 | Camping Trip_(1) | really good story.too bad there is no further chapters in this story. |
| 2013-04-04 22:46:00 | I can't believe I enjoyed that! Thank God it's only a story... but it made me think of some women who were like Gabby...young, short and willing to please - Thanks Purvv! | |
| 2013-04-05 22:13:24 | D Returns | Who moderates this section? This is simply a story (and not a very good one) and it belongs in the story section...not jokes nor poems sections, either! |
| 2013-04-10 09:08:55 | really good story... can't wait to read more of your stories! | |
| 2013-04-10 09:33:21 | Kadeecame grows up | I enjoyed your story but you really need to proof-read your stories so that they can be better appreciated by everyone who reads them. Your story was good but the grammar and missing punctuation really interrupted the flow of your stories... and sometimes made your thoughts rather confusing to follow. I rate your story a "7" out of "10 but with a little fixing up, it could go as high as 8, 9 or even 10 - depending on how well you fix it up. BTw.. I don't see how this relates to your other stories. I read :Kadee" (first time) and suddenly now she's having sex with family - where is the story between these two where she is introduced to incest? Now that I think about it, all your KADEE stories should be numbered and checked for continuity.. it would be great to read a series of stories that related to one another. I know you can connect them with a little re-write, if you haven't thought of that already. i'm looking forward to reading more of your (fixed up) stories. |