| 2013-03-24 00:18:13 |
Showering with younger sister
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good story, despite factual realities aside - i enjoyed it and thats what matters to me :) so keep writing more stories! |
| 2013-03-24 00:22:54 |
Janice Goodall mind controlled day 1
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i hate to say a story is bad... so let me say this on needs a lot of work! |
| 2013-03-24 00:27:02 |
Janice Goodall mind controlled part 1
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was the other version of this same entitled story just a rough summary of this story? you should delete it! this was much better written! but it still needs work although it shows a good deal more talent than the other version. keep working on it. |
| 2013-03-24 02:08:22 |
Married to my sister
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excellent story.. want more :) |
| 2013-03-24 02:14:44 |
Sister's drunken party
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fun story..i had fun imagining doing the same thing he did! |