| 2015-01-08 09:51:20 |
A New Day, A New You part 5
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Great chapter waiting to see where you take tho part of the series now that his training is finished. Keep on writing and remember you tell a good tale and follow through leading into the next section. |
| 2015-09-12 15:08:30 |
Empire Prologue and Chapter 1 revision.
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Great start to this story watching and waiting for more of it. Keep on writing. |
| 2015-10-01 14:17:37 |
Dead Stick 2
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Good story so far looking forward to more of it so we can see if Celina's treatment holds. |
| 2016-01-14 16:23:36 |
A New Day, The Other Me chapter 1
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Interesting start to this polar opposite of Guy's story. Will keep watching for part 2 and see how it goes from here. Keep on writing as you have a good imagination. |
| 2016-02-29 22:33:59 |
A Wisard I Am 2
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It is a shame you didn't write more of this part of the story. It feels lacking leaving it with them on the road. |