| 2014-07-18 21:23:10 |
Galactic Vendetta Chapter 01
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Proofreading a story is more for those stories that have no sexual overtones at all. Your story. Is well based and has a good start to it I would like to see more come out soon. Don't let these anonymous critics stop you from writing the more you write, the better you will get. |
| 2014-11-06 08:34:50 |
The Aftermath 2
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Very good cant wait for Mary to find out that Jim is her big brother and have a family again. |
| 2014-06-21 13:54:26 |
The Mission_(0)
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Very good start to a continuous story. I look forward to seeing more from you on it. |
| 2014-05-06 16:56:43 |
Frontier V
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I think that you should keep Carl as mostly good with just a hint of the bad boy in him. Give the girls just a hint of powers and let things progress from there. |
| 2014-10-23 15:55:39 |
Further News About 'She is the One'
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Sorry to see that your stories are being taken down especially since bee authors are posting stories with young sec in them and I mean explicit sec among children under 14 not just young terns under 18 |