| 2013-03-06 22:09:50 |
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A very good story. Only thing I saw that was wrong and its a minor thing is afterwards not after words. All in all it's a great story and I hope for more chapters in the future. |
| 2013-03-06 22:42:46 |
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Very good story again so far I have enjoyed every story I have read that you have written. Keep up the good work! |
| 2013-03-13 15:14:03 |
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Excellent story! Can't wait til daughter gets back from Geneva
Hope her and Lana can keep daddy busy on the way to Hawaii
Keep up the good work. I am anxiously waiting on the next chapter. |
| 2013-03-15 06:44:24 |
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I have greatly enjoyed this series of stories. You have inspired me to start my own story. Great writing I hope you keep up the good work. |