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Comments from bav86
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-07-12 16:27:06 | Getting the Cheerleader | Hey Kristinarox, I liked your story. It was quite sexy. A few notes: You forgot a word in: "Nick watched through the trees in her backyard which gave him a perfect into her bedroom to see " And the layout needs a little bit more work. The line breaks seem a little bit random. If your into this stuff, I'm looking for somebody to review my work. Let me know if your interested. Keep on writing! |
| 2012-07-14 14:45:17 | Entrapped, Enslaved. Chapters 1-4 | Thanks for the compliments! Yeah, I'll finish. Don't know how long it will take though. I've got a few more things planned :) |
| 2012-07-14 18:49:55 | Entrapped, Enslaved 11-13 | Don't worry. Peter agree's. He'll take care of it in the next chapter ;) Glad you enjoyed the rest! |
| 2012-07-15 18:31:37 | Enslaved, Entrapped 14-16 | I'll do my best to write some more as soon as possible. It's a little busy at the moment. @Charmbrights, Don't worry, I wouldn't copy suggestions word for word. I might not use them at all. But I'm curious as to what other people would like to see happening. That's all :) Thanks for commenting and/or reading! |
| 2012-07-17 12:33:58 | Catherine 1 | I liked it, more please! |