| 2012-06-05 08:13:43 |
I meet Alex
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Sorry about the paragraphs. My new lap top refused point blank to cut and paste and in the kerfuffle I went through to get the story onto this site, a lot of the text got all squashed up. Things did start very slow. I thought in later years that we wasted a good 25 days but things continued for the next 8 months and when I get to part 2, I think the action will srart in the 2nd or 3rd line. |
| 2012-08-01 18:40:29 |
Ryouichi and Akira
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Hi BalancedGuy, I've been waiting ( somewhat impatiently) for the next part. I guess you're busy. When I read your 1st paragraph, thoughts for the start of another story flashed through my mind. I must talk to you about this. I will send you a PM, so dont forget to check your inbox |
| 2013-02-25 18:05:56 |
A visit to the doctor
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Nice story , well written. So let's have more, maybe with big brother. |
| 2016-01-10 02:22:20 |
It started with an itch.
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Sorry about the formality, I find if I depart too far from the queen's English (like wot it is spoke) my spell checker locks me out ! |
| 2016-04-30 23:20:43 |
The Return Trip
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Thanks for that. There is more to come with David and his friends; I'll try to get it posted soon. |