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Comments from darthel0101
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-08-15 13:38:45 | My sister Kate | Learn how to use capitalization and punctuation. Set paragraphs off with double spacing. Proof to ensure that your spelling is accurate and that you are using the correct words. Maybe after those lessons are learned I will be able to finish your story. |
| 2014-10-20 15:49:33 | Next Chapter | This story was removed due to a personal threat made against the author. I do not think that he will be happy with your posting of it behind his back. |
| 2014-07-25 18:15:18 | The Light...a story about love, life and death in WW2 Japan | AZ, I don't know who gave the neg votes but I have added a logged in pos for the story. This story is one of the greats on this site and I can still see the imagery in my mind months after reading it in the CAW. |
| 2014-07-18 20:19:05 | She is the One (Part 7) | I have only one suggestion for you: Take your story where YOU want to take it. Some suggestions might make that more easy and can easily be incorporated into your work and some suggestions will open up ideas which will enhance your story but if you take a suggestion which takes you away from where you want to go then your story will suffer for it, if only in your own eyes. I have seen this with another author on this site and he publicly regretted it. In counterpoint to those who ask for more sex since this is a sex site, I have only the following to say: your story is yours alone and you know when the sex is right for your story - do not give in just to have a wank scene and end up destroying the story which you have planned. I will also agree that your story should be published once it has been completed; you are that good of a storyteller. |
| 2014-08-12 05:43:10 | Mall Santa | I just found this while going through your stories. Why haven't I been through the list before? |