| 2012-05-18 05:34:45 |
Large Family, Large Secrets. Part 1.
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I will post part 2 in a week or so, thanks for the comments. |
| 2012-05-18 18:34:07 |
Large Family, Large Secrets. Part 1.
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Please leave comments saying what you don't like about it, if it is something to do with the grammar or language used, we would like to know. |
| 2012-05-21 09:52:26 |
Large Family, Large Secrets. Part 1.
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Well the main author is not part of the family or story, we tell him what it was like for us and what we felt and said, he made it readable and into a story, though if you mean me, I would be "Chloe" not my real name, this account is used by all involved but it is under my name, but not address. |
| 2012-05-21 17:39:20 |
Large Family, Large Secrets. Part 1.
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Oops! Forgot to log in, the comment below is mine. |
| 2012-05-24 08:50:04 |
Large Family, Large Secrets. Part 1.
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Thanks for the constructive criticism guys, this is the author typing right now not the account holder, so I will re-read this story and triple-check the next one, it is currently half way through being written, I've been busy IRL and I'm the only writer. |