| 2012-06-02 17:46:05 |
First incest experience with my mother - Part 2
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You might consider an editor to clean up some typos, some reoccurring, but otherwise having a good time reading! |
| 2013-02-23 01:50:46 |
Mom taking care of me 3
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If you are trying to write "more things for different people that enjoy different fetishes, " then how can this be a true story? A true story does not adjust for other people's interests. Grammar and syntax atrocious in all three chapters I have read so far. Premise is hot, that is the reason I have kept on reading. |
| 2013-02-23 02:27:07 |
Mom taking care of me 4
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Wett instead of wet; i instead of I, come on dude! So many examples of poor spelling and grammar. Takes away from the story SO much. |
| 2013-05-04 23:57:43 |
I Was a Virgin Nymphomaniac
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Please, let us know what happened next! |
| 2013-10-14 18:43:56 |
Mark and Kerry and me make a happy three
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"As we said our goodbyes the next day, they asked me not to tell Terry what had happened." I am guessing that should have read something like she asked me not to tell Terry. A very minor typo in a quite nice story! |