| 2013-07-08 00:28:03 |
Connor and Claudia
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I'd give this a neutral rating if there was one. I hate to give you a negative rating because I know how hard it is to write an effective erotic story. I enjoyed some of the elements. Take your time with the telling. After you finish writing your story, go back and expand on the details and help us see what you are describing. I look forward to your next installment. Claudia being pregnant this soon is too early. Let it be a near miss. |
| 2014-10-16 04:08:49 |
Meeting my cousin-in-law's niece and making good use of her asshole
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You are consistent in your pathetic attempts at attention. Even those comments that you post to yourself are pathetic. You love any attention and bask in the negative. |
| 2015-10-01 01:14:13 |
The Jaguar Shaman
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As of now, I have three more parts outlined. I appreciate the comments, please feel free to make any comments you like. I write stories like that I like to read. The sex usually takes a back seat to the story line, which I know turns off a few readers. But I appreciate you taking the time to read the whole thing and I enjoy writing them, so thank you! |
| 2015-10-14 03:40:30 |
The Jaguar Shaman II
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It's always a dilemma deciding to allow anonymous votes. I appreciate all the positive comments to be sure. If someone doesn't like it and they leave a reason, I find that helpful too. Thanks for reading and I hope to continue to write for your pleasure. |