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Comments from goiko
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-11-24 20:19:11 | raping grandma and mom pt 1_(0) | I gave you a negative rating for your paragraphs. PLEASE break them up! Reading ONE long paragraph is not only boring but impossible. That makes your story unreadable and a negative comment magnet. |
| 2012-12-13 10:35:57 | my brothers join in | Not a bad story/ Nice to read about African-Americans for a change. My only problem is you need to space your paragraphs to make reading easier. Other than that keep writing!! |
| 2012-12-23 15:33:07 | The Son Who Could -revised | As for rating, the first story was trash to me. Bad spacing, horrible plot, terrible ending. Negative rating. The original story was much better. Laid out right, better plot and a better ending. How could you take a good story and make it crap? |
| 2012-12-29 23:19:00 | Batgirl Returns Part One | Nice story but when did he take the gag from her mouth? You didn't mention that and a few grammar and spelling errors were found. I hope part is coming soon and will be better. |
| 2013-01-19 08:32:11 | The New Life (Prologue) | Loved it!! Can't wait to read chapter one. |