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Comments from goiko
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-10-11 01:49:16 | My sexy step daughter (part 2) | Same as the first part. Too jammed together. You need to space it better. |
| 2012-10-18 08:06:07 | My sexy principal is My Mother | Nice domination story but paragraphs are too long and you need to spell check better. I hope part two is better written. |
| 2012-10-21 07:34:18 | Mom, Wine, and a Scary Movie_(1) | Also could have spread out the paragraphs a bit more for easier reading. |
| 2012-11-17 12:05:25 | MY TEACHER THE TEASE Part 2 | It was a bit short but my main problem isn't your fault. I think it the site formatting your story. Odd letters and symbols in the show up. There are a few grammar errors but not enough to take away from the plot. Mostly I would say space the paragraphs a little better and just a little more description of the action. |
| 2012-11-24 20:16:51 | raping grandma and mom pt 1_(0) | I gave you a negative rating for your paragraphs. PLEASE break them up! Reading ONE long paragraph is not only boring but impossible. That makes your story unreadable and a negative comment magnet. |