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Comments from goiko
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2017-05-06 15:39:17 | Sex with my aunt for the first time_(2) | I agree. English is not your native language. That said the spell checker could help you in your writing efforts. I suggest the next story you write use an editor or spell checker first . I look forward to your next work. |
| 2017-04-08 13:30:38 | The Ring of Desire - Chapter 1 | Old plot but not too bad. Hope to see part two soon. |
| 2017-03-04 16:31:08 | The Mortal and the Magic Wand - Chapter 02 - Tuesday | Just read chapter two. I saw where a teacher took the wand. Why didn't he wish it to become a watch or ring but keep it's power? That way the wand wouldn'thave been noticed. |
| 2017-02-26 01:13:40 | House Of Sin - Chapter 1 - A Very Hard Morning | I like the slow build up and the background on the characters. Keep it like that. A slow erotic build up works well. |
| 2017-05-15 00:16:29 | Arthur owns his mom & teacher | Terrible. I think you were bored and decided to put your fantasy on paper and post it. Bad idea. No plot. Poorly written. try again but put some thought into your work. |