| 2012-03-01 19:42:25 |
Full Circle - Chapter Eight
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Please Please Please do Chap 9 (The attack) and Chap10 (pack and move) so we do not have to die of suspense. This is the most exciting story I have read. I love the high-tek arms and ordinance you use in your story. Love to see the adhesive rounds used. Could make for some comical scenes. |
| 2012-03-01 21:49:41 |
Hell Hath No Fury...Ch5
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Thanks for the next chapter. I thought this was the last. Now I am in suspense again. Very well doe on the end of each Chapter. Keeps you hooked for the next. Very believable story too. Could happen in real life. Ok now do #6 |
| 2012-03-02 18:16:48 |
Bree 1 - Kate
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Great story. Easy to read. Good job of taking a fantasy and making it sound real. I still remeber my youth on a ranch. Girls really do love horses. I think many men would be jealous if they knew we came in second place. I am anxious to read the rest of the stories. |
| 2012-03-03 11:03:55 |
The Wife's Dare
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Thanks for fixing the quotes whoever did. Reads better |
| 2012-03-03 13:28:47 |
The River_(2)
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I have always enjoyed stories about New Mexico Been through there a few times. Stories like this make me want to go back. Love to hear more stories of the Wild Bunch. I like the way you post your stories, very easy to read. Enough detail to put you right in the scene. Good job. Want more. |