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Comments from XManner
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2009-01-14 18:04:23 | The Tease_(2) | Difficulty reading text. |
| 2009-02-15 19:33:21 | BABY GIRL_(1) | After your other story I suggested you describe your characters in more detail... and then I clicked to this and found that you had improved in the manner I suggested. You're and excellent writer. All you need is to write more. |
| 2009-02-15 19:33:37 | Oh God... yes...! | Excellent work. Although, maybe next time you can be more descriptive with the characters' appearance, aside from their actions. |
| 2009-05-25 23:45:20 | As You Desire | An age-old story... |