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2020-03-19 20:32:19 Tara: Trophy Wife Life: Part 1_(1) Charmbrights you are not wrong. Don't have anyone to proofread these things. Also I'm not so sure I care too much about technicalities of grammar too much in a porn story much like I don't tend to follow the realistic physicality of having intercourse because saying a person threw up a gallon of cum in her guts is obviously implausible and physically impossible but I tend to write for the final, basic purpose of the story which is porn. lol But you were not wrong at all, sorry if it was distracting to your reading.
2020-10-08 19:56:51 Krista's Bad Mistake Not gonna down vote yet. Just wanted to leave some feedback as to why you might be getting a negative rating. There are definitely some spelling and grammatical errors you could fix, but I think the main thing is that there are no paragraphs. A wall of text is hard on the eyes. Consider breaking it up and I bet people would be more favorable in their votes:)
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