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2019-01-13 19:39:21 The Chauffeur (#15) Babies and a New Love Excellent series. I like the way the stories flow out of stories. I've even been inspired to write some that may piggy-back off of yours. I'll seek your permission should I decide to write & publish them.

I'd change some of the repetitive dialogues. For example, when they're cumming: why do they ALL say the same thing? LOL At first it WAS funny; but, it became annoying & lazy ... to me (as a writer). We don't ALL speak the same way. The same way you've brought out each character's personality, let their individuality & sensuality shine when they're cumming. Just a suggestion. Those less critical of language may not care and/or may not have noticed. It's a small thing, doesnt take away from the well-thought out series AND you did ask :-D

If only there were REAL people who actually wanted to live peacefully without taking from or hurting others. We don't all have to be alike. Can't we just live in love?
2015-12-06 02:27:20 First Black What a wonderful story. It's EVERYTHING I want to happen to me ... but with two or three big white cocks. My man watching would be icing on the cake. Yummy!!!
2015-12-06 00:48:15 Wife exposed and fucked in Denver dance club Mmmmm ... I want to do this!!!
2015-12-05 23:46:40 Earning the Afternoon 2 cocks are ALWAYS better than 1!!!
2016-04-25 18:15:00 The Drive through the Valley Great series!
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