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Comments from MILF4USE
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2019-01-13 19:39:21 | The Chauffeur (#15) Babies and a New Love | Excellent series. I like the way the stories flow out of stories. I've even been inspired to write some that may piggy-back off of yours. I'll seek your permission should I decide to write & publish them. I'd change some of the repetitive dialogues. For example, when they're cumming: why do they ALL say the same thing? LOL At first it WAS funny; but, it became annoying & lazy ... to me (as a writer). We don't ALL speak the same way. The same way you've brought out each character's personality, let their individuality & sensuality shine when they're cumming. Just a suggestion. Those less critical of language may not care and/or may not have noticed. It's a small thing, doesnt take away from the well-thought out series AND you did ask :-D If only there were REAL people who actually wanted to live peacefully without taking from or hurting others. We don't all have to be alike. Can't we just live in love? |
2015-12-06 02:27:20 | First Black | What a wonderful story. It's EVERYTHING I want to happen to me ... but with two or three big white cocks. My man watching would be icing on the cake. Yummy!!! |
2015-12-06 00:48:15 | Wife exposed and fucked in Denver dance club | Mmmmm ... I want to do this!!! |
2015-12-05 23:46:40 | Earning the Afternoon | 2 cocks are ALWAYS better than 1!!! |
2016-04-25 18:15:00 | The Drive through the Valley | Great series! |