| 2009-11-10 17:02:57 |
Lucky dog Ch7: Special Accommodations
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I like the plot it could use a little bit of refining I think but good |
| 2010-03-31 05:12:05 |
Moving brings Siblings Closer
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Nicely done but I might have left it open ended to expand on later. |
| 2010-04-01 21:11:18 |
Karen_(1)
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Very nicely written... excellent lead up that holds the reader and I liked the rest as well. |
| 2010-04-08 01:00:39 |
The nasty sister
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Yikes this could have been formatted better....Please in the future |
| 2010-04-08 22:32:35 |
Homecoming_(2)
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The story is good... The perspective leaves something to be desired. But nice for a first try |