| 2011-12-09 00:55:51 |
George and Lennie Snuff a Girl
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Maybe Lennie could put the next girl in the incinerator alive. |
| 2011-12-15 20:54:25 |
White slavery or is it Really part 1
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Good story, can't wait to read it all. |
| 2011-12-16 02:29:00 |
A bumper harvest 1
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I gave you a pos rating for plot, and tags, if you other assholes read this shit, don't be hypocrites, you are into the stuff. I agree with others your w riting is bad. Next, too much forensic evidence, even a mall cop could find your main character. (exaggerating a bit) I hope your next part is better. |
| 2011-12-16 02:50:40 |
A bumper harvest part 2
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Good promise, a little better, could use a little beefing up in the middle. The ending romantic in its own way. I find i could get off on it, even though I'm not into beastialiy. Positive vote |
| 2011-12-16 23:42:38 |
A family of Newfound Sex Slaves: Part One
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No real incest, just humiliation and mental abuse to the little girls. Even though I do not condone child molesting and rape for real. I have real sanctioned caps for some. |