| 2011-12-08 04:28:27 |
Girl in Yoga Pants
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Sorry about all the random question marks. Also some of my words were deleted when pasted. Sorry |
| 2011-12-09 02:24:54 |
Girls in Yoga Pants- Repost
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Edited version reposted as well as chapter 2 |
| 2011-12-09 02:25:11 |
Girls in Yoga Pants- Repost
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Edited version reposted as well as chapter 2 |
| 2011-12-09 02:27:50 |
Girl in yoga pants- Re-edited Chapter 1 and Chapter 2
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Any and all tips appreciated |
| 2012-01-16 02:21:18 |
My dream girl
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Hey guys, sorry about the disclaimer, put it at the beginning of the next part, i will edit after i'm done with all the parts, i do not know an editor so i am looking for the readers for tips and such. Sorry about the incest tag, my mistake. Thanks for all of the tips, i really appreciate them, this is "based" on a true story, but like every movie based on a true story it is dramatized. Any story ideas you would like to see implemented into the next couple of parts let me know. |